这两句句子有没有文法错误?
问题描述：
这两句句子有没有文法错误?
1.I'm not hardsome,I think you will deride my look as stupid.
2.If you see my look,you will not want to chat with me as I'm really ugly very much.
答
非要说这些话的话,正确的改好的在下面了
1.I'm not handsome.I think you will deride at my stupid looking.
2.If you see my looking,you will not want to chat with me because I'm really ugly.
不过这样说别人就算不看,也不会再跟你聊天了.
也许你可以说I'm a little bit shy to see you!说含羞好点.