请问这句话有没有语法错误,表达方式怎样改进一下?
问题描述：
请问这句话有没有语法错误,表达方式怎样改进一下?
It was not long after she was promoted from nurse to vice-head that twenty to thirty babies fell ill,so she had no choice but to be vexed.
答
that 改成 than吧,意思是：他从护士被提升为二把手不久就有2-30个小孩得病了,因此他无可选择只有.
not longer.than：表示.不久就.了,有点因果关系,又表示紧随而来的后果.