The summer of that year, you who smiled so silly are still in my heart.有语病么?

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The summer of that year, you who smiled so silly are still in my heart.有语病么?
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The summer of that year,you who smiled so silly are still in my heart.没有语病
you是主语 who smiled so silly 是定语are是系动词 still in my heart.是表语