高分求一段英语文章的批阅

高分求一段英语文章的批阅
Semi-closed bay and close to the mainland as Jiaozhou bay is,it was never frozen in history.But due to land reclamation in recent society,the volume of sea water is decreasing sharply,which also weaken the ability of heat storage of the bay.Such factors has made Jiaozhou bay frozen recent years,And construction wastes and household garbage used for land reclamation have also polluted the seawater,which made fishery industry along the coast suffered a lot.The presence of OCEANSCRAPER is to solve such problems.It will replace land reclamation.People can build buildings directly on the seabed now.In this way,we can avoid problems caused by land reclamation,such as frozen sea and pollution.
指出有什么问题,和正确的写法（全篇,不要只改一句或者一个词）.