将来进行时,看看我翻译错了吗?

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将来进行时,看看我翻译错了吗?
我十一月一日准备去武汉,开始学习CCIE课程以完成我的理想
I would be going WuHan in November,I will begin learning CCIE course to finishing my dream .
好像几处不完善吧,还有那里用start和begin没区别吧?

I will go to (或 I'm going to ) WuHan on November 1st to start my CCIE course for realizing my dream.
1. 将来时will do 或 be going to do
2. 具体日期前用介词 on
3. begin 和 start 区别不大
4. 实现梦想:realize one's dream 或 dream come true
5. 可以用一句表达,不需要分两句说