急!求大师帮我改改这篇英语作文.关于体罚孩子的问题.谢谢啊!

急!求大师帮我改改这篇英语作文.关于体罚孩子的问题.谢谢啊!
In this day and age, many families have only one child who is the apple of their parents. These children often lack of responsibility. Corporal punishment on students whether it should be becomes a hot topic in these years.
Many children can not afford that self-control and to distinguish right from wrong. Some children spend most of their time watching TV or play games. They do not themselves homework. Thus corporal punishment is necessary. Children need to develop good habits of corporal punishment.
Corporal punishment would adversely affect the child. Firstly, age of the child is still small, they would become introverted personality of corporal punishment. Second, children may become rebellious go astray.
In the final analysis, I concede that give children the right guidance and some of corporal punishment on their better. whether parents and teachers or the community want children to grow up healthy and happy.