大家看看这个英语作文又没语法错误,帮忙修改下,谢
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大家看看这个英语作文又没语法错误,帮忙修改下,谢
Hi!My name is YeyiFan.Today is sept.10th,Today is teacher's day.I am not happy.Because I computer is out of work.today is not my day.
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Hi!My name is YeyiFan.Today is Sept.10th,and it is teacher's day.I am not happy.Because my computer is out of work. Today is not my day.改动了一点,你对比一下就知道了