看看这句英语对不对,不对,应该怎么改Their melodic music floating like a quiet stream deep inside my heart.
问题描述：
看看这句英语对不对,不对,应该怎么改
Their melodic music floating like a quiet stream deep inside my heart.
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Their melodic music floating like a quiet stream is inside my heart deeply.
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Their melodic music is floating like a quiet stream deep inside my heart!
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修改如下：
Their melodic music is flowing like a quiet stream deep in my heart.
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不对，缺少谓语。把动词改成谓语形式。
floating --- floated
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their melodic music is floating like a quiet stream deep inside my heart