下面这个句子的语法错误怎么改?Whereas ourparents still in charge of the amount of our money,so a majority of us arecareful with our money in daily life so as to use the limited money to buygoods as much as possible

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下面这个句子的语法错误怎么改?
Whereas our
parents still in charge of the amount of our money,so a majority of us are
careful with our money in daily life so as to use the limited money to buy
goods as much as possible

whereas 不需要;still(加 are )in;careful with改成careful to;as much as改成as many as. a majority 改为 the majority

a majority 改为 the majority

whereas 不需要;still(加 are )in;careful with改成careful to;as much as改成as many as