请帮我看看这两句英文哪里要改改,明天就要用了
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请帮我看看这两句英文哪里要改改,明天就要用了
As there is a report says that many workers from some garment factories feel stressful and suffer from respiratory disease because of flax,jute and ramie dusts in the air of the overcrowded workplace.
In order to avoid it ,the company should provide an adequate space for employees to work or move around,as well as enough windows which allows fresh air coming in.
答
顺序有点奇怪；As a report says,there are many workers from garment factories that feel stressful and suffer from respiratory diseases because of flax jute and ramie dusts in the air of the overcrowed ...