帮我看一下这篇文章有没有错!I will have a birthday party at my house.I would like to invite you to my birthday party.It will begin at 7:30p.m.I live in the NO.65 Heping Road.You can take the NO.1 bus and take off the bus in Yangguang Hotel.My house is in the opposite side.It is easy to find.I hope to see you then.一定要仔细些看!
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帮我看一下这篇文章有没有错!
I will have a birthday party at my house.I would like to invite you to my birthday party.It will begin at 7:30p.m.I live in the NO.65 Heping Road.You can take the NO.1 bus and take off the bus in Yangguang Hotel.My house is in the opposite side.It is easy to find.
I hope to see you then.
一定要仔细些看!
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都没分！还4级呢！！
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基本上没什么错,我帮你改了下I will have a birthday party at my house and I would like to invite you to my birthday party.It will begin at 7:30p.m.I live in the NO.65 Heping Road.You can take the NO.1 b...