急求纠正语法,并更正!Each people all have own dream,dream leads us forward.My dream is to be a dancer.Since I was young,I began to practice dancing,no matter how hard the process of practice,I have always insisted.I hope one day I can stand on the stage,let everybody appreciate my graceful dancing,clapping for me!

Each person all has his own dream which leads us forward. My dream is to be a dancer.Since I was young, I began to practice dancing. No matter how hard the process of practice might be,I have always insisted. I hope one day I can stand on the stage, letting everybody else appreciate my graceful dancing and , clap for me!

改正如下：Each person all has own dream, dream leads us forward.My dream is to be a dancer.Since I was young, I have begun to practice dancing, no matter how hard the process of practice is, I have been always insisted.I hope one day I can stand on the stage, let everybody appreciate my graceful dancing, clap for me! 望采纳,O(∩_∩)O