英语：帮我修改一下这几句英语.看有没有什么语法错误之类的.When you see this post, perhaps you do not love me, maybe she has occupied most of your life.Thank you for staying with me a year. Although this result isn’t what I wantDarling,please allow me to call you like thisIt seems impossible.The end of the story, the best to wish you

英语：帮我修改一下这几句英语.看有没有什么语法错误之类的.
When you see this post, perhaps you do not love me, maybe she has occupied most of your life.
Thank you for staying with me a year. Although this result isn’t what I want
Darling,please allow me to call you like this
It seems impossible.
The end of the story, the best to wish you