这句话有七个错误 谁帮我找出来i was very ill,that i went to the dr.blinder and found out that i had been infected with a viral infection.

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Dr.Blinder's
and i was found out that i was infected with a viral infection.

修改后的句子：I was so sick that I went to Dr.Blinder's and found that I was infected with a viral disease.
1、very改成so,因为so...that是固定搭配,含有因果关系.如果不改则不符合语法,因为从句that前面不应该有逗号.
2、ill改为sick.一般说very sick,意思是病得很重,没有歧义.very ill意思可以解作“很邪恶”,一般不用来形容病重,因此有很大的歧义.
3、Dr.Blinder前面的the去掉,因为称谓前面一般不加the.
4、应该是Dr.Blinder’s,去某人家,或者去某人处,应该在后面加 ’s,比如,I want to go to the doctor’s.我想去（医生的）诊所.
5、find out是主动去查出,find是指“发现,得悉”.句子中,病人并非主动去追查病情,是医生去主动“find out”而非病人自己,因此find out不恰当,用“find”就可以了.
6、Had been改为was.被感染是不需要用过去完成时,因为这是个有或无的问题,句意未牵涉感染的时间长短,故不需用had been.
7、原句中,“be infected with an infection”这样的表达有问题,就相当于说：“感染了一种感染”.要么就说infect with a disease“感染了一种病”,要么就说have an infection“有感染”.两者不能糅成一体.