很短的英文句子,语法没错麼?The photo is displayed in such an obvious way:in the middle of the page,taking up one third of the space,instantly evokes a sense of deep concern in the reader.冒号用的对麼?还有语法对麼?
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很短的英文句子,语法没错麼?
The photo is displayed in such an obvious way:in the middle of the page,taking up one third of the space,instantly evokes a sense of deep concern in the reader.
冒号用的对麼?还有语法对麼?
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正确的如下：The photo is displayed in such an obvious way: in the middle of the page, taking up one third of the space, instantly evoking a sense of deep concern among the reader.
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冒号后面改成：the middle of the page takes up one third of the space,which instantly evokes a sense of deep concern from readers
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The photo is displayed in such an obvious way:in the middle of the page,taking up one third of the space,instantly evoking a sense of deep concern among the reader.
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没有问题。可以确定。