英语翻译That the traffic which is over crowded with people and busy will make people have more concern to this city.看到这张照片时不禁想起了我在学校的那些日子（can't help but）可以用一般现在时吗？

英语翻译
That the traffic which is over crowded with people and busy will make people have more concern to this city.
看到这张照片时不禁想起了我在学校的那些日子（can't help but）
可以用一般现在时吗？