After I write this article,I won't care about this.有错吗?After I write this article,I won't care about this 这句语法有错吗?

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After I write this article,I won't care about this.有错吗?
After I write this article,I won't care about this 这句语法有错吗?

倒是没语法错误,只是不太地道。

有错误,this 应该换成 it 或者thatone ,这两个词在这里代指你写的文章,而this 不行.