请帮我找出下面的语法和表述错误,XXX always using our XX,but when I confirmed the customer's new order ,someone told that XX has been discontinued,It is being improved and will be continued at November,Nearly two or three months we can not provide it .I have not received any information about this before,and its too long to deliver order ,need your help,thanks a lot!
请帮我找出下面的语法和表述错误,
XXX always using our XX,but when I confirmed the customer's new order ,someone told that XX has been discontinued,It is being improved and will be continued at November,Nearly two or three months we can not provide it .I have not received any information about this before,and its too long to deliver order ,need your help,thanks a lot!
第一句中 always 后面加动词原形. always use
第一句中 someone told 后面少了宾语 ，加个 me
第二句中 nearly two or three months we can not provide it不够地道，改成we can not provide it within two or three months.
XXX always uses our XX, but when I confirmed the customer's new order ,someone told that XX has been discontinued, It is being improved and will be continued on November. Nearly two or three months,we can not provide it .I have not received any information about this before, and its too long to deliver order ,need your help,thanks a lot!
错误的地方用括号（）括起来,改成如下：XXX (is) always using our XX,but when I (was going to) (confirm) the customer's new order,someone told (me) that XX has been (no longer produced).It (has been) imp...