maybe exercises are only good for healthy people while leading a bad result to paitient

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maybe exercises are only good for healthy people while leading a bad result to paitient
这句话有语法问题吗,我的意思运动队健康人好,但是队病人不好怎么说,想用while

个人觉得语法没有问题,最后的病人应该是Patient.我觉得应该改成doing exercise,我想问那个while leading对吗,觉得好奇怪while leading我觉得可以那么说,也就是doing exercise leading a bad result to patient。也可以说while doing exercise are good for healthy people,it lead a bad result to patient.这样强调后者“对病人不好”,比较恰当。前面改成doing exercise确实比较好。