短文改错:Now I'd like to tell you something took place in my school yesterday .短文改错:Now I'd like to tell you something took place in my school yesterday .In the afernoon we are all held together for our 18-years-old birthday .At the first we promised that like grown-ups we should be responsible for our society .Then we expressed thank to our parents who experienced hardships to bring us up and our teachers
短文改错:Now I'd like to tell you something took place in my school yesterday .
短文改错:Now I'd like to tell you something took place in my school yesterday .In the afernoon we are all held together for our 18-years-old birthday .At the first we promised that like grown-ups we should be responsible for our society .Then we expressed thank to our parents who experienced hardships to bring us up and our teachers who educated us heart or soul. And our teachers also gave to us cards expressing our good congratulatins and wishes to us .Firnally ,we put on wonderfully performances.
共有10处错误,有漏词,有多余,有修改,每处错误及修改均仅限一词.
took 前面加that
are---were
18-years-old ----18-year-old
At the first 去掉the
like----as
thank ----- thanks
or-----and
去掉gave后面的to
expressing our -------expressing their
wonderfully------wonderful
Now I'd like to tell you something which took place in my school yesterday .In the afernoon we were all held together for our 18-year-old birthday .At first we promised that as grown-ups we should be responsible for our society .Then we expressed thanks to our parents who experienced hardship to bring us up and to our teachers who educated us heart or soul. And our teachers also gave us cards expressing our good congratulations and wishes to ourselves.Finally , we put on wonderful performances.
更正一楼一些错误,总共十处错误!具体情况如下： Now I'd like to tell you (改成something that took 或 something taking) place in my school yesterday. In the afernoon we (去掉 are) all held together ...
Now I would like to tell you something about my new school