求解英语改错题,this is a story tell by my father:when i was boy ,the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the spring festival,my grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes.one time i just couldntwait for the spring festival dinner,as i was about take a piece from a cooked duck,i saw grangma in the kitchen looking at me.shake her head,she said,"it isnt a good time to do that ,dear."at once i apologize and controlled

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求解英语改错题,
this is a story tell by my father:when i was boy ,the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the spring festival,my grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes.one time i just couldntwait for the spring festival dinner,as i was about take a piece from a cooked duck,i saw grangma in the kitchen looking at me.shake her head,she said,"it isnt a good time to do that ,dear."at once i apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started,you know,that was a dinner we had waited for several month"
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