I hope you will have a good development in China.I will always stand by you!Come on!有语法错误或者其他错误吗?这是给自己一个喜欢的人!

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I hope you will have a good development in China.I will always stand by you!Come on!有语法错误或者其他错误吗?
这是给自己一个喜欢的人!

把good 改为better

I hope you can have a good advancement in China.
一般用 I hope sb can do sth句型

我希望你在中国有好的发展。我会一直在你身旁,好吗?

我希望你在中国有很好的发展 我会一直站在你身边 加油

I hope you will have good opportunities for advancement in China.
development 一般是比较抽象的发展,个人的发展,还是用advancement比较好
I will always take your part!Move on!
永远支持你,也是这句比较好
继续努力用move on 更加地道些.

不地道。试改译: I hope you could make progress and enjoy yourself in China. I will always be here and support you forever! Good Luck!