I hope I can and you forever,but I don't know what do you think?Can you tell me?这句话的意思我想知道翻译,并且想知道这句话是否有语病?

问题描述:

I hope I can and you forever,but I don't know what do you think?Can you tell me?这句话的意思
我想知道翻译,并且想知道这句话是否有语病?

语病:I hope I can and you forever 应该是I hope I can stay with you forever
翻译:我想跟你永远在一起,不过我不知道你的想法,你能告诉我吗?

翻译是
我想跟你永远在一起,不过我不知道你怎麽想,你可以告诉我吗?
语病是超严重地
首先
I hope I can and you forever 这一句,不懂中文的人是看不懂滴.
正确应该是 I hope I can be with you forever.
然後
but I don't know what do you think,语病也存在
正确的是 But I don't know what you think.
Can you tell me 就没有问题.