would you like to have a heart,the elderly not live 我感觉语句不通样.修改下,would like to have a heart,the elderly not live 我感觉语句不通样。

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would you like to have a heart,the elderly not live 我感觉语句不通样.
修改下,would like to have a heart,the elderly not live 我感觉语句不通样。

求婚用的,大意是:能与我永结同心,白首不相离吗?最后那个词应该是leave

愿得一人心,白首不相离。的意思。。

Would you like to have a heart,the elderly can not live
你发发慈悲吧,那老人活不了啦。
后句+个情态动词吧!
谢谢,请参考采纳~~

愿得一人心,白首不相离。

你想有一颗心吗?老人不活,
确实不知所云,语法错,句意也不通.