but 和 because of 可以连用么?这句话这么表达对么?But because of our behavior, some animals and plants are in danger.because of 是不是应该用 since来替换呢?

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but 和 because of 可以连用么?
这句话这么表达对么?
But because of our behavior, some animals and plants are in danger.
because of 是不是应该用 since来替换呢?

不可以。because of our behavior, some animals and plants are in danger.已经可以了,但不够地道。 some animals and plants are in danger because of our behavior。

个人觉得这里but改成while好一点

due to改成这个比较好吧
but改为however