帮我看看这个句子有语法问题吗?谢谢哈I will graduate from the Peking University in July with a Bachelor of Computer Science and I have passed CET-6 with a mark over 560 in 2008.
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帮我看看这个句子有语法问题吗?谢谢哈
I will graduate from the Peking University in July with a Bachelor of Computer Science and I have passed CET-6 with a mark over 560 in 2008.
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完全OK啊。因为求职简历上面的英文不需要一个个抠字眼的。而且，看得出来这个是你自己写的，所以在面试的时候你会运用的很熟练。如果可以去修改的话，反而会打乱自己习惯的句子结构，影响自己的发挥。
个人的一些经验，仅供参考。
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I will graduate from the Peking University in July with a Bachelor Degreen in Computer Science and I have passed CET-6 in 2008 with a score over 560.
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I will graduate from the Peking University in July with a Bachelor of Computer Science and I PASSED CET-6 with a mark over 560 in 2008.