求把这篇英语作文改成过去式27日以前要August 12thToday I went to a friend's house,her home is in the countryside.Nine in the morning,I set out from my house,riding for an hour to her home.When I arrived at her house she was warmly invited me to go with her to pick strawberry.She told me how to grow strawberry picking strawberry and correct.At noon we ate a delicious lunch.Afternoon we go to climb the mountain near the mountain.The mountain is very cool,but there are a l

Yesterday I went to a friend's house, her home is in the countryside. Nine in the morning, I set out from my house, rode for an hour to her home. When I arrived at her house she was warmly invited me to go with her to pick strawberry. She told me how to grow strawberry picking strawberry and correct. At noon we ate a delicious lunch. Afternoon we go to climb the mountain near the mountain. The mountain wasvery cool, but there were a lot of wild flowers

你的文章大部分已经是过去式了,只除了一些小问题,我给你改了.除了这些时态的问题以外,我还顺手把一些文法的小错误给改了,比如run-on sentences之类的:)
I went to a friend's house; her home was in the countryside.On that day,I set out from my house nine in the morning and rode for an hour to her home.When I arrived at her house,she warmly invited me to go with her to pick strawberry.She told me how to grow strawberry and how to pick strawberry correctly.At noon,we ate a delicious lunch.In the afternoon,we went to climb the mountain near 【her house 山旁边的山?这是打错了吧?我把他改成她家旁边的山了.】.The mountain was very cool,and there were a lot of wild flowers.
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