You walk slowly,I am afraid I am unable to catch up with.你走慢点,我怕我追不上.’这句话(English)是否有语病?

问题描述:

You walk slowly,I am afraid I am unable to catch up with.
你走慢点,我怕我追不上.’这句话(English)是否有语病?

有,你这是中国式英语,你走慢点是,please walk slowly

slow down, I am afraid I am unable
to catch up with you.

有!
1.两个独立的句子不能用逗号相连!
2.catch up with 没有宾语
你走慢点,我怕我追不上 可以翻译为“Walk slowly please,for I cannot keep up”

缺连词。逗号后面加一个or
还有前半句最好改成祈使句,把You去掉。

有语病,首先“走慢点”是祈使句,前面不能用you.另外,走慢点和我怕追不上之间有一个转折,要用 or (否则)来连接.还有,I'm unable 应该用将来时.改为:
Walk slowly,or I'm afraid I won't be able to catch up with you.