关于‘I'm going to write about my country’ 的,My mortherland hand suffered many hardships and trials in the past century.Until the present have many difficult state.The other country have many senses to my country.My country is development country.She have are many insufficient parts,but she is try doing best.she need chace and change.不是太长,但是感觉写的不太好,

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关于‘I'm going to write about my country’ 的,
My mortherland hand suffered many hardships and trials in the past century.Until the present have many difficult state.The other country have many senses to my country.My country is development country.She have are many insufficient parts,but she is try doing best.she need chace and change.
不是太长,但是感觉写的不太好,

网上翻译的吧?看不懂你想说什么。

My mortherland suffered many hardships and trials in the past century. Until the present, there had been many difficult states. The other country have many senses to my country(这句话不致到你要说什么). My country is a developing country. She has many insufficiencies, but she is trying to do her best. She needs chance and change.

My mortherland had suffered many hardships and trials in the past century.Until the present there are many difficult states .other countries have many senses to my country.My country is a developing country.She had many insufficient parts,but she is trying her best to improve.she needs chances and change.

的确写得不好,语法错误太多,语言太中式,不知道你要表达的是什么,所以需要好好修改。加油,孩子