求高手给我评一下英语作文!(两个首段)Recently we often hear that people become negative under heavy stress. It is common that become positive is especially important. It caused a discussing on how to become positive.——————————————————————————————-Recently we often hear that college students initiate an enterprise instead of secure a job. However, a large portion of them failed for various reasons. It caused a hot debate on the college students start an enterprise.
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求高手给我评一下英语作文!(两个首段)
Recently we often hear that people become negative under heavy stress. It is common that become positive is especially important. It caused a discussing on how to become positive.
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Recently we often hear that college students initiate an enterprise instead of secure a job. However, a large portion of them failed for various reasons. It caused a hot debate on the college students start an enterprise.
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Recently we often hear that people become negative under heavy stress.It is common that become positive is especially important.It caused a discussing on how to become positive.It is common knowledge ...