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帮忙 改一下错 10处
Last week life didn't look very well for heart transplant patient. Barry *s from London.He was told six month ago that he would need the operation if he is to survive. He immediately planned to make the across Atlantic journey to the hospital in Chicago to have the operation on.While he was in transit at JFK airport in New York,hereceived the news that his new heart had accidentally transported to other hospital.Barry then had to get on a different plane to convey him to the hospital,there the operation was carriedout in time.Barry is now gradually recovering from the transplant.But he told us," I feel like being a new man-this new heart has changed my life."

Last week life didn't look very well (改为good) for heart transplant patient.Barry *s from London.He was told six month (months) ago that he would need the operation if he is(was) to survive.He im...