每个括号里的算一排,不作为标点,每排都有错,请指出并改正,有一排无错误

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每个括号里的算一排,不作为标点,每排都有错,请指出并改正,有一排无错误
(I have read your advertisement in the newrpaper)(yesterday and I'm writing to tell you what I'd like to)( work as the volunteer for the 2008 Beijing Olympics.)(My name is LiMing.I'm a 16 -years -old senior 2 )(student in No.4 Middle School.I'm in very )(good healthy and I like sports and games very much ,)(especial table tennis .In addition .I can speak English )(very well .but I can communicate with visitors and )(athletes to abroad .I'm sure I can do the job well.)(Plese get touch with me at number 010-56781568.)还要追加分,越早越多

I have read your advertisement in(on) the newspaper
yesterday and I'm writing to tell you what(that) I'd like to
work as the(a) volunteer for the 2008 Beijing Olympics
My name is LiMing.I'm a 16 -years -old(16-year-old) senior 2
student in(of) No.4 Middle School.I'm in very
good healthy(health) and I like sports and games very much ,
especial(especially) table tennis .In addition .I can speak English
very well .but(and) I can communicate with visitors and
athletes to(/) abroad .I'm sure I can do the job well
Plese get touch with me at(by) number 010-56781568.