英语句子改错.

问题描述:

英语句子改错.
“你将会因为曾经住在的那个地方而感到骄傲.”
You will be proud of a place where you had ever lived.
这句英语有没有错误?麻烦按照汉语的意思作下小的改动.

应该改成:You will be proud of the place that you had ever lived in.
live是不及物动词,后面必须跟介词in