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As an ordinary Chinese citizen whose native language is not English,it is really a tough job for me to write to you,Mr.President; therefore I sincerely hope you can spare some time to consider about my following suggestions on unemployment.

As an ordinary Chinese citizen whose mother tongue is Chinese,it is really a tough job for me to write in English to you,Mr President;but i sincerely hopu you could spend some time to consider my foll...