请帮我看看这段话的错误
问题描述:
请帮我看看这段话的错误
During my school time,I have got six times scholarship and successful passed CET6.Besides,I have learned the business training and had some working experience.So I am confident that I am the suitable candidate for the job.
答
时态改一下,完成时改为过去时.一些动词也改一下.
During my school time,I were granted six times scholarship and successfully passed CET6.Besides,I have learned the business training and got some working experience.So I am confident of being a eligible candidate.