一篇初一英语作文的草稿,请大家帮我改正错误好吗?

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一篇初一英语作文的草稿,请大家帮我改正错误好吗?
The Chinese Spring Festival is an ancient festival,to the Chinese people,it is just like Christmas in the west.
In the Spring Festival,we have a lot of customs.For example,stay up late,eat dumplings,set off firecrackers,the children receive the gift money etc..We in the Spring Festival Eve,family members will have seen the party together,it is very interesting.
I like Spring Festival best,how about you?

The Chinese Spring Festival is an ancient festival to the Chinese people,it is just like Christmas in the west.In the Spring Festival,we have a lot of customs,for example,staying up late,eating dumpli...我想问的是,我的这篇有错误吗?如果有,请帮助改正一下,谢谢。写的不错,大框架不用改。小错误都改了呀,仔细看。