改一句话
问题描述：
改一句话
Gently guide him into clubs ,sports ,any activities that he enjoys and would widen his circle.
that he enjoys是修饰any activities的,那么如果我想一起修饰前面提到的sports和clubs,那这句话该怎么改?
答
I gently invite him to clubs,matches,and some activities he is interested in and in these places may he widen his circles in his favor.
可以分为两句话并列.后一句我用了倒装.
我认为自己在里面改了一些更为合适的词