I consider the boot camp my first real job .If you want them,make the money and buy them youself

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I consider the boot camp my first real job .If you want them,make the money and buy them youself
这两句话有错吗,个人认为第一句在camp后应加is
第二句最后改为buy them by youself
还有
where I learned that lofe in the navy centered around completing daily tasks
分析下这句话的结构,顺便翻译

没有错.consider something something (noun或者adjective都可以).Do something oneself - 这个是对的.