高手帮我改一下这个句子 怎么改都行 就是根据这个意思就可以拉 这是我的同学的文章 水平很有限 要是有看不懂的单词就自己编一个..
高手帮我改一下这个句子 怎么改都行 就是根据这个意思就可以拉 这是我的同学的文章 水平很有限 要是有看不懂的单词就自己编一个..
An old gardener was workd hard all his life ,he gave his orchard to his sons after he died and told them that there was many treasune in the orchard.At fist ,the two sons could not understood the meaning of father told them when the frst harvest came,they sell all the fruit with a good price .AT last ,the bother known the treasure was all the fruit in the orchard .their father want them worked hard in the orchard ,because more fruit they got ,the more treasure they have.
呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵!
服你了!
An old gardener worked hard all his life ,he gave his orchard to his sons after he died and told them that there was much treasure in the orchard.At first, two sons could not understood the meaning what their father told until when the first harvest came,they sold all the fruit with a good price .At last ,the bother knew that the treasure was all the fruit in the orchard .Their father wanted them work hard in the orchard ,because the morethey got fruit, the more treasure they have .
不只为什么,我觉得你的英语水平不差,好像是有意在考验我们似的.很多都是明显错误,前面写错了,但后面写对了,比如work, 你连the more, the more.都会用,我实在想不出你的英一会差.