请帮我检查一下下面的英文句子有哪些错误,谢谢!

请帮我检查一下下面的英文句子有哪些错误,谢谢!
The drawing above strikes me very much. It's describes that a girl has a job interview in the afternoon, but she thinks that doing some make up is the only way to prepare for it.
It reflacts the social phenomenon that a pretty girl has much more advantage than a smart girl. It is sad! It increases that a lot of girls spend much more time on her making up than her studing. As a result, many girls who is smart but not pretty has no chances to get a job. Instead, girls who is pretty but not smart can get a job easily but isn't able to do it. It is unfair.
In my opinion, we should change our esthetic standard. Companies should pay more attaintions to the smart thing than the appearance. If a girl is smart, please give it a chance!