英语作文 批改

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dear mrs wilson
im lihua.,you kid tong's classmate from yucai international schol.i want to present your son.now,his chinese have better than others.he in chinese very hand.because he is english people.so his english is very good.he was english teacher's welcome.other teachers care of him.students also like him.because he was a english people.so many students like to make friends with him.he in our school is a star.in his after the study life.i will give him to often the most help.let him study will.
打多少分呢？