请那位老师帮我改改英语作文.

请那位老师帮我改改英语作文.
Students of present age feel more pressure than before.On the one hand,students have to do so much homework and complete a large number of study tests ¬—— some of them are even difficult to adults.Students would feel tired to deal with them.On the other hand,as the development of the computers,more and more computer games are created.It seems that computer games are more interesting and relaxing than study.The most of students like games more than study.Some of them who can’t control themselves will be addict to the world of Internet.