朋友的英语日记求帮修改
朋友的英语日记求帮修改
My child will be born intwo months' time,I have been thinking aboutcreatinga good name for the baby,butI am always busy these day.It is not easy to creat a good name for baby,especially in our country.I have to thinkalot,such as what the name means,if it souds good,maybe the most important thing about the name is if the name is lucky,so I also have to think of the baby's birthday.But the baby has not been borned yet!
My child will be born in two months' time(去掉‘time),I have been thinking about creating a good name for the baby,but I am always busy these day(days).It is not easy to creat(create,但我觉得用make就可以了) a good name for(加上a) baby,especially in our country.I have to think a lot,such as what the name means,if it souds(sounds) good,maybe the most important thing (去掉thing)about the name is if the name is lucky,so I also have to think of the baby's birthday.But the baby has not been borned (born)yet!
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My child will be born in two months.I have been thinking about creating a good name for the baby,but I am always busy these days.It is not easy to make a good name for a baby,especially in our country.I have to think a lot,such as what the name means,if it sounds good.Maybe the most important is if the name is lucky,so I also have to think of the baby's birthday.But the baby has not been born yet!