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Love is always my gift to you.Happy Birthday!
In quiet and thoughtful ways...In happy and fun ways...All ways and always---I love you.Nothing can make me change my mind.And I swear it's true cause a girl like you is impossible to find.Just so you know,this feeling has taken control of me and I can't help it.Just as I love you more today than day before.I know as each tomorrow comes I'll love you even more!
Hey girl,ooh you're a stunner.Hot little figure,yes you a winner and I'm so glad that you're mine,You mean everything to me.I don't need money ,I don't deed cars.You are my whole world,and I'm into you with every kiss and every hug,you make me fall in love.
Just accept my love,congratulations and warmest wishes for this day and evey day!I promise you that you will never down.
So everybody,If you see my girl,tell her I miss her smile,tell her i'm counting the minutes gonna see her in a little while.But I know when she holds onto me,she is the one thing that I could never live without……
Just tell her I love her!