英文改错另外还有一篇作文!特急!

英文改错另外还有一篇作文!特急!
1 Thank you for making my hike outstanding
2 I had a lot of funs .Never have I been on such an
3 amazing hike ago .I really learned a lot about nature
4 Now I know many more than I did before .When I
5 got home I had such many things to tell my parents
6 about the hike .Thank you for sharing their knowledge
7 and experience to us .You have really increased my
8 understanding of the world .As you see it ,this
9 had a great effect on me .Thank you again for taking the
10 time to help the kids learn about the environment
作文：作文：假若你是来自四川汶川的李欣,正在参加一次国际夏令营.你准备在一次活动上对你所在的灾后重建学校进行介绍.主要内容如下：
1学校设施（标准运动场,所有教室都装有最好的教学设备）
2师资（新来了不少优秀大学生）
3学生学习情况（努力,去年有百分之70的同学升入各类大学.