I think be a teacher is my favorite work!The reason of one is I like children very much,their smile is very beautiful,ma

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I think be a teacher is my favorite work!The reason of one is I like children very much,their smile is very beautiful,make me happy.And they are cute ,let me herrt worm enough.The reason of two is I want to tanch many children ,it is great.I believe one day my students can be everywhere!Now I must study hard for my dream.
帮我修改一篇英语小短文~这是我一个朋友提问得到的.我看了总觉得有哪里貌似不对..
为什么你们的回答都不一样呢?

I think being a teacher is my dream!The reason is I like children very much,in my opinion,their smile is very beautiful,which make me happy.And they are cute ,let my heart feel warm .The second reason is I want to teach many children ,it is great!I believe one day my students can go everywhere!Now I must study hard for my dream.
这样应该就可以了
出现了一些中国式英语,注意以下