大家帮忙找找看有没有语法错误In the summer vacation,I will do some exercises to make me more health.Also ,I will read some good books to improve my Chinese.becaose my chinese ie not very good.The most interesting thing ie I will go to Xi'Anto relax myself.I alsowill be a volunteer,becaose I think it is very interesting .Finally,I will help my parents do some chores ,becaose Ithink they are tired in daily life.I hope I can make these come true.

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大家帮忙找找看有没有语法错误
In the summer vacation,I will do some exercises to make me more health.Also ,I will read some good books to improve my Chinese.becaose my chinese ie not very good.
The most interesting thing ie I will go to Xi'Anto relax myself.I alsowill be a volunteer,becaose I think it is very interesting .Finally,I will help my parents do some chores ,becaose Ithink they are tired in daily life.I hope I can make these come true.

【故障解决】
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②降低IE安全级别。执行“工具→Internet选项”菜单,选择“安全”选项卡,单击“默认级别”按钮,拖动滑块降低默认的安全级别。
③将IE升级到最新版本。
可使用以IE为核心的浏览器,如MyIE2。它占用系统资源相对要少,而且当浏览器发生故障关闭时,下次启动它,会有“是否打开上次发生错误时的页面”的提示,尽可能地帮你挽回损失
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除了前面他们说的语法,单词错误,我想说,这段英文真的很中文,很明显的汉式英文,中文逻辑。不需要每个句子后都要解释一下because…,可以跟插入语“…,you know,…”或者说“since…,…”(在此是由于的意思)或者“To improve…,I will…”。用一些不同的句式,会显得自然些,否则就像流水帐了。

me →myself
health→healthy
becaose→because,ie→is
is (that)I will 表语从句要加that
I also will →will also
these→them

开头health→healthy
relax→to relax
最后these→those