帮我检查一下这篇英语作文有没有语法错误一定要细细检查May 12th is an unforgettable day for all the Chinese people.There was a serious earthquake on that day in Sichuan Province.The buildings fell down suddenly and thousands of people died.I was very sad when I heard of the news.All the Chinese people get together to overcome the difficulties.Most people donated money to them.,so did I.The soldiers and the doctors tried their best to save more people and they never give up!I hope
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帮我检查一下这篇英语作文有没有语法错误
一定要细细检查
May 12th is an unforgettable day for all the Chinese people.There was a serious earthquake on that day in Sichuan Province.The buildings fell down suddenly and thousands of people died.I was very sad when I heard of the news.
All the Chinese people get together to overcome the difficulties.Most people donated money to them.,so did I.The soldiers and the doctors tried their best to save more people and they never give up!
I hope the Sichuan peole can rebuid their hometown early.I believe tomorrow will be better!
答
我晕倒了,楼上为什么连一些拼错了的单词都没有看出来呢?还照着copy下来...1、英文字典里面没有unforgettable这个词.用memorial更加合适2、died是“死了”,是没有错,但是在这里用were killed更恰当,表示“被地震所杀...