找错 有六个错误的地方 并改正Just as I was about to go to bed that night,I heard arapping on the door.I sat at the top of the stairs and peered down.My motherwrapped her coat tightly about her and pulled open the main door.I could notunderstand how my mother never looked through the peephole that my father anddrilled through the door before opening it.A whoosh of cold air rush into thehouse travelling all the way up to when I was.I shivered and hugged my kneesto my
找错 有六个错误的地方 并改正
Just as I was about to go to bed that night,I heard arapping on the door.I sat at the top of the stairs and peered down.My motherwrapped her coat tightly about her and pulled open the main door.I could notunderstand how my mother never looked through the peephole that my father anddrilled through the door before opening it.A whoosh of cold air rush into thehouse travelling all the way up to when I was.I shivered and hugged my kneesto my chest.When I heard a gruff made voice,I stood up immediately and took afew step down,hoping that my father had return earlier than expected.However,it was Mr Peter Wilkins.He is the chief of the police force.Looking aroundsuspicious,he said that a convict had escaped from * and was last seenrunning at the direction of our house.Instinctively,I glanced at the windowsto make sure they were shut tight.
her- herself,
how my mother -why my mothe
A whoosh of cold air rush into-- rushed into
all the way up to when I was---all the way up to where I was
took a few step dwon---- took a few steps down
my father had return---- had returned
He is the chief--- He was the chief
looking around suspicious--- suspiciously