有没有一些错误my name is ***,I'm 15 years old.I'm a lively Chinese girl.I like singing songs running and playing the guiter.I surf the Internet all the time.I don't like go shopping and I think that rock is terridle.I hope we can become good friends in the near future.回答请尽量准确.并且希望能尽快给出答案
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有没有一些错误
my name is ***,I'm 15 years old.I'm a lively Chinese girl.I like singing songs running and playing the guiter.I surf the Internet all the time.I don't like go shopping and I think that rock is terridle.I hope we can become good friends in the near future.
回答请尽量准确.并且希望能尽快给出答案
答
语法没问题。。。
那些单词不知道是你打错呢还是写错了。。。
答
哎·····
1.句首字母要大写的。。。
2.人是不能用lively形容的，你想说lovely吧？
3.guitar。。
4.I don't like to go 或I don't like going shopping
5.terrible...
另外，你说你一直上网，这不合适吧？可以改成I spend lots of time on the Internet.
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My name is ***,and I'm 15 years old.I'm a vivacious Chinese girl.I like singing songs,running and playing the guitar.What's more,I surf the Internet all the time.However,I don't like to go shopping an...